Sara's Poetry and other stuff
Posted 08 April 2004 - 03:06 PM
The clouds pass slowly
as if mourning a death
the sky is a perplexing gray
making the trees look like specters
the sun shines down
casting bewildering shadows
a harsh wind blows
making flowers bow their heads
i lay silent
as if in a trance
a tear sheds slowly
and falls to its death
i can't handle the truth
i would rather die instead
i could just ignore the world
noone would really care
you can still be alive
you can still be mine
just for awhile
then i will return
to the life i once loved to live
to life that was suddenly thrown away
but i am trapped
between my dreams and reality
i would rather dwell inside my head
alone, with only you and I
but in reality
you could call me crazy
for I still see you here
Posted 08 April 2004 - 06:41 PM
Posted 08 April 2004 - 06:46 PM
Posted 08 April 2004 - 07:11 PM
i lay awake
my tears fall softly
as questions race through my head
where are you?
and why did you leave?
Why couldn't you believe me?
and why do i care?
I know i told you alot of lies
and i know i really loved you
I held your hand for soo long
why did I let go?
You used to make me soo happy
why did I push you away?
I don't know whats wrong with me
and I probably never will
but If I could take it back
you would without hast
you were my only friend
and i left you were we once stood
I hold they locket you gave me
as if it were my only possesion
maybe if i wish
you will come back
and i can set you free
Posted 09 April 2004 - 01:25 AM
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Posted 09 April 2004 - 07:10 AM
The key to writing well, is not worrying about if it fits with the poem, or if it sounds cool. Write because it's your emotion bleeding through the pen.
Posted 09 April 2004 - 02:51 PM
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Posted 14 April 2004 - 02:23 AM
I'm always right. Ok, maybe not, but still ...heh, I was right this time.
Posted 14 April 2004 - 09:51 PM
Posted 14 April 2004 - 10:08 PM
I just posted one of my poems in this forum, not this thread, though. You guys should check it out, it's called "Traitor" (that's what I made for it so far).
Posted 14 April 2004 - 10:24 PM
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