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Posted 15 April 2004 - 03:08 PM

k here is my newest poem...kinda short....



my life once was a thunderstorm
my tears the rain
my pain the lightning
my heart was once an empty plain
nothing growing
nothing alive
but now since i met you
my heart has begun to thrive
it is now a forest
alive and green
now i can say
that my heart is truely
of your creation

#17 fluffygreenaliens

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Posted 15 April 2004 - 03:22 PM

YAY *jumps around* i read it first i read it first and i love it YAY *does happy dance*

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Posted 15 April 2004 - 03:26 PM

*laughs histerically* never had anyone gets soo excited before..*makes a note to let fluffy read everything first*

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Posted 15 April 2004 - 03:38 PM

lol thats right let me read everything first lol..

*does happy dance* ner ner everyone i read it first ner ner *does happy dance*

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Posted 15 April 2004 - 08:29 PM

lol..fluffy's a bragger...

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Posted 16 April 2004 - 01:08 PM

lol yep thats me.. *rubs it in everyone elses face* ner ner ner ner ner i read it first lol..... w00t.gif icon_twisted.gif hehehhee (lol i ha dto do that just to prove i'm a bragger lol)

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Posted 16 April 2004 - 10:18 PM

lol..you and my best friend would get along perfectly...she is a HUGE bragger...its rather annoying sometimes..but i don't mind it that much...after all she is my best friend...

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Posted 19 April 2004 - 10:38 PM

fluffy..I got another one!!

k, here it is...

lonely and broken
I sat catching my tears
nothing can save me
I have nomore fears
I just want to sit here
and slowly waste away
my love was never wanted
my heart never mended
seems like I just keep on breaking
noone left to fix me
so i just sit in my corner
and watch the world threw my tear stricken eyes
maybe someday you'll see me
but for now I am a shadow
noone where to call my own

#24 DemonKnightPrinceMarth

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Posted 20 April 2004 - 02:41 PM

I love your poem

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Posted 21 April 2004 - 12:19 AM

aww...thanxs DemonKnightPrinceMarth.. smile.gif

#26 theonesephiroth

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Posted 23 April 2004 - 02:53 AM

your poems are beutiful and like u said true poems are not writen in ink but by the soul

i write good poems when im a bit sad

my heart is a glass rose fragile and week

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Posted 24 April 2004 - 04:15 AM

cry_smile.gif awwwwwww cry_smile.gif i didn't get to read it first *starts bawling* cry_smile.gif cry_smile.gif


i love it smile.gif great job cry_smile.gif cry_smile.gif cry_smile.gif cry_smile.gif should have let me read it first cry_smile.gif

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Posted 25 April 2004 - 02:44 AM

QUOTE(theonesephiroth @ Apr 22 2004, 08:53 PM)
your poems are beutiful and like u said true poems are not writen in ink but by the soul

i write good poems when im a bit sad

my heart is a glass rose fragile and week

aww...thanks theonesephiroth...i would like to read one of yours sometime... smile.gif

omg...*hugs fluffy* i'm sry...I was really mad when I posted this on the forum...I guess I really didn't think about sending it to you... sad.gif i'm sooo sry...

#29 Commisar Marley

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Posted 28 April 2004 - 03:22 AM

Those were amazing...

[How nice]

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Posted 28 April 2004 - 04:11 AM

QUOTE(Commisar Marley @ Apr 28 2004, 03:22 AM)
Those were amazing...

[How nice]

Yeah, like you'd know real talent. Pu(s)sy boy.




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