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#16 masterblacktop

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Posted 12 April 2005 - 07:18 PM

good yeah hear this


Love's a stream that knows no borders,
Passports, visas, lengths of stay,
Laws and papers, rules and orders:
All these lies it sweeps away.
Love knows no color, race, or creed,
Spilling over states at will,
Submerging memory in need,
Drowning walls in waters still.

No bar can block it as it flows,
Tumbling towards eternity,
Gathering wisdom as it goes,
Yearning for our common sea.
this to my girlfriend

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I do not know you well, but what I know
Enchants me, like a song sung far away.
I cannot hear the words, but what they say
Hangs softly on the hills where I must go.
I see you furtively and note your eyes,
Hazel and dreamy, your spirit half elsewhere;
I note the sheen of your dark, lustrous hair
And wish I knew your thoughts and shared your cries.

This love brings me sweet pain, but I want more,
Driven by a dream I can't control.
I want the truth of you, untamed and whole;
In frantic hope I haunt your open door.

#17 HaloD MC

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Posted 13 April 2005 - 02:16 AM

QUOTE(mightymax43441 @ Apr 12 2005, 05:03 PM)
that was good i liked it

but just wondering are both of them about the same girl?

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Separate, I wrote "Darkness" a year ago and wrote "The One" this morning.


master not bad..i like them

#18 HaloD MC

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Posted 14 April 2005 - 04:42 PM

added another poem please check it out.

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Posted 15 April 2005 - 03:05 PM

Sean I love them all..

*pin worthy*

#20 HaloD MC

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Posted 18 April 2005 - 02:16 AM

AH thanks Sara! More will be added in the near future

#21 masterblacktop

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Posted 20 April 2005 - 07:46 PM

thats just good man cry_smile.gif

#22 HaloD MC

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Posted 04 May 2005 - 03:37 AM

Another one...



The Candle glows,
theres a bit of wax that runs down the edge.
I sit there in the corner, just barley even seen.
The light moves throught the room just barly enough to see the shadow that lies there.
Theres music playing in my head, no one can hear but me.
I try to lose the moment fall into a deep sleep and never want to wake up.
I hear bangs on the door, but im not going to anser.
Nothing will make this better, no one can change what they did.
What is done is done, memories will not be forgotten.
No matter at what cost the icon has been dismantled.

-HaloD MC

#23 Zelda Princess

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Posted 07 May 2005 - 12:50 AM

cry2.gif I just read them all..

I love them Sean. Very, very much.

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#24 HaloD MC

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Posted 07 May 2005 - 04:05 AM

Thank you Jess....

you doinno how much that means to me unsure.gif smile.gif

#25 apoptosiscontroller

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Posted 28 May 2005 - 09:35 PM

You could copywrite them and then sell them to a publisher?

#26 HaloD MC

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Posted 29 May 2005 - 12:42 AM

I dont think there that good:X

#27 apoptosiscontroller

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Posted 29 May 2005 - 12:46 AM

Well, you never know...

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Posted 04 June 2005 - 12:30 PM

QUOTE(apoptosiscontroller @ May 28 2005, 07:35 PM)
You could copywrite them and then sell them to a publisher?

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QUOTE(apoptosiscontroller @ May 28 2005, 07:37 PM)
nice.... 4.gif

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QUOTE(apoptosiscontroller @ May 29 2005, 05:24 AM)
You write a lot like Tom Clancy... Less graphic, tho

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all bumped like you aksed, I quoted them.

#29 HaloD MC

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Posted 05 June 2005 - 06:08 AM

what are you talking about?

#30 apoptosiscontroller

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Posted 05 June 2005 - 06:16 AM

me, bumping "old" topics




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