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#31 theonesephiroth

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Posted 05 June 2005 - 05:28 PM

only one of those was a bump.

#32 charlie

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Posted 05 June 2005 - 06:34 PM

May 7th BUMPED to May 28th | April 21st BUMPED to May 28th | May 2nd BUMPED to May 29th

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Posted 10 October 2005 - 07:02 PM

nice.... smile.gif

#34 HaloD MC

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Posted 02 January 2006 - 10:49 PM

Not sure if this is a poem or not..its just kindof a little thing i put together... enjoy..


I am no hero,
I just want you to realize that.
Many things that I do are bad
but then you walk by.

I see you glance at me,
I step in front of you and stair into your eyes.
everything around us starts to fade.
The key to your soul lies deep in your beautiful green eyes,
And im unlocking it.

Jagged daggers start stabbing my heart,
Its time my friend and I guess it is.
I lean in staring into your eyes,
The memories of your cries seem to dissapear now.


Where at the ocean no worries or concerns.
As my lips touch yours i feel like I'm in heaven.
I wont let you go, Claire

Never


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#35 Darth Revan

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Posted 25 January 2006 - 09:22 AM

poetry is just writing for the soul as im told by my english teacher
sounded good i like it keep it up Halo

#36 HaloD MC

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Posted 05 March 2006 - 09:00 PM

Thanks Revan, lol i didnt see it till now..

Well heres my first attempt at rhyming in poetry..

Untittled

The sunshine rises you can almost see the glare
cuz spring is here, you can taste it in the air.
But the snow is still here, bittery and cold
and my heart still screams cuz this sh*t is getting old.
No more lies for that unforgetable action
because weather you like it or not there is no satasfaction.
Cuz your in a daze and theres never turning back
when all you really wanted to do was to be on the right track.
But your trying really hard, doing what ever you can to fight this
You see the sun shimmer off the snow, its lifeless.


#37 BreakTheReflection

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Posted 05 March 2006 - 09:14 PM

QUOTE(HaloD MC @ Mar 5 2006, 01:00 PM) View Post

Thanks Revan, lol i didnt see it till now..

Well heres my first attempt at rhyming in poetry..

Untittled

The sunshine rises you can almost see the glare
cuz spring is here, you can taste it in the air.
But the snow is still here, bittery and cold
and my heart still screams cuz this sh*t is getting old.
No more lies for that unforgetable action
because weather you like it or not there is no satasfaction.
Cuz your in a daze and theres never turning back
when all you really wanted to do was to be on the right track.
But your trying really hard, doing what ever you can to fight this
You see the sun shimmer off the snow, its lifeless.



I like this one...especially the last two lines...they end it well...

#38 apoptosiscontroller

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Posted 05 March 2006 - 09:34 PM

Halo writing poety zac_smile.gif

This is weird.... I never thought of you writing poetry....

I'm not reallly a poetry connesieur..... they're good o.O

#39 Zelda Princess

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Posted 06 March 2006 - 12:30 AM

QUOTE(HaloD MC @ Mar 5 2006, 11:00 AM) View Post

Thanks Revan, lol i didnt see it till now..

Well heres my first attempt at rhyming in poetry..

Untittled

The sunshine rises you can almost see the glare
cuz spring is here, you can taste it in the air.
But the snow is still here, bittery and cold
and my heart still screams cuz this sh*t is getting old.
No more lies for that unforgetable action
because weather you like it or not there is no satasfaction.
Cuz your in a daze and theres never turning back
when all you really wanted to do was to be on the right track.
But your trying really hard, doing what ever you can to fight this
You see the sun shimmer off the snow, its lifeless.



I agree with Katie.. this has a good ending. The notation of the sun and snow are very good contrasts.. great job Sean..

#40 HaloD MC

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Posted 20 May 2006 - 07:03 PM

Here we go Im just writing this off the top of my head..


The man sits is his old rocking chair as his memories pass one by one
he remember off all the old times playing football, fishing and swimming under the sun.
He knows that life is a game and you need to play by the rules
thinking
breathing
seeing all the illusions that fill the air
he cant even controll it, he cant even compare
He seens a dark wimpering dog to his right
he knows he'll live to tell the tale
stale
pale
its time for jail.




Wow i laugh at my self here...I'll write some good ones (to me) soon and post them up..i just didnt wanna loose my topic under the sea.

Oh and thank you Jess and Katie if I havent already said thanks smile.gif

#41 BreakTheReflection

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Posted 21 May 2006 - 01:42 AM

That's good, especially since it all came right off the top of your head, Sean haha I'm glad you're posting here again...sorry I un-pinned...I just wasn't sure if you were gonna revive the topic or not...

#42 Maester Seymour

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Posted 23 June 2006 - 11:30 AM

That is a good one from thinkin' off the top of ya head.
it rhymes like a rap it ain't a rap is it?

strictly poetry aight.

good work btw as well champ


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Posted 07 July 2006 - 05:06 AM

QUOTE(Maester Seymour @ Jun 23 2006, 05:30 AM) View Post

That is a good one from thinkin' off the top of ya head.
it rhymes like a rap it ain't a rap is it?

strictly poetry aight.

good work btw as well champ




ha..sorry for such a long bumb but yeah... Its kinda hard for me not to rap when i write rhyming poetry, cuz rapping is kind of the same style..

Ill be posting some more poems. Be pattiant.

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Posted 07 July 2006 - 05:30 AM

errg im trying something new...so here.

The Day Dreamer

When things get cooped up for so long, people tend to missunderstand who they really are.
They forget about morals and the people who look up to them, respect them and love them.
Its a game of baseball, it can swing either way. But do you care if you get a hit or get an out?
Its all up to you and your beleifs, you have to be the best you can. Why waste your life? Would you do it for some one you love? Some one you cherish and would do anything for? Thats just the problem.
Heaven is so far away up past the clounds, people lay in thiere beds at night wishing they could see some one one last time.
Faith in who you love you must have,
do you have faith?
would you die for some one?
Would you fall into peices and turn into nothing just for five minutes with some one?
She never cared she just ignored.
She makes you fall into a daze, her poison gets stronger, and stronger and worse untill you are forggotten. Crumble into peices like you wish you were.
never say never you might say.
Thats a lie there is nothing left for you to do.
sleep and dream my child for this dream catcher will lead you to your future.
dream during the day, dream at night, you are the day dreamer.



#45 BreakTheReflection

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Posted 07 July 2006 - 04:56 PM

I lke that last poem, Sean...it sounds like you're giving someone important advice...good work on this...




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